Open Poetry #14 |
In the Shimmer of a Candlelight...repost from #10 |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
In the Shimmer of a Candlelight Close your eyes and release your mind, leave your pain and sorrow behind, let me lead you through the night, in the shimmer of a candlelight. Close your eyes and relax my dear, while my love is coming near, temptation is growing tense abound, let me discover this place beyond. Sweet promises whispered by my sweet lips, The light softly touch from my fingertips, When they slide lightly all over your skin, Feeling the vibration that comes from within. My fingertips caress you softly and sweet, Searching their way going slowly beneath, Sweet sensual smooches, so softly and fine, My tongue that meet yours, passionately entwine. Trembling lightly while we explore, Satisfy the desire longing for more, with every touch we feel the temptation, losing control, so tense in anticipation. Oh your sweet love is really so intense, I Drown in your love and loss all of my senses, Involved through our passions, so wild and so sweet, Feel how our souls confluent, each time that we meet. Close your eyes while I'm holding you tight, together we explored the cherished heights, soft whispering words are coming through, whispering tenderly "I love you". Charisma ~*TMP*~ oktober 2000 |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I, for one, want to thank you for reposting this lovely piece of art. How sensual it is, with the candles shimmering! Great writing, Charisma...as you always do!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I love candle light, it's so tranquil....shimmer on |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm lighting a candle right now! Kathleen Blake |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So tenderly written...Candlelight is the perfect setting to romance and words of the heart...beautiful heartfelt writing~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you all for your lovely replies, and I am glad that you liked it. Your comments are all very highly appreciated by me. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Mmmmmmmmm...soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile, may you forever share the beauty and passion of true love forever with your love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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