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The Kiss
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The Kiss |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
when the last fade of a kiss takes its place upon the wind when it falls to the earth bringing with it the perfect sound when it reaches your heart your memories remain so clear that bit of pleasure you have that follows you through the years take a moment and remember true the kiss of love is really pure and though the time begins to fade the kiss is there for memories sake. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, this is tremendous! I liked this a lot!  Sauni Sauni :) |
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pamela08 Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 27California,USA |
that was very powerful...it was a good read.. i look foward to more of your work true beauty comes from within not from without |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
You have it perfect . i like Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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LittleCookie Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 55asheville,NC,UnitedStates |
AAHHH ... yes! Memories!  LittleCookie~~:*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
brought tears to my eyes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
sweet memories.....sweet kiss....overwhelmed by melancholy. thanks for sharing this lovely piece. Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
excellent philosophy and well noted here in this piece! |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
Upon a tombstone in France which marks a British soldier's eternal rest these words in marble white adorn "Memories live longer than Dreams" I have a friend who once said-"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone." |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I like this one a lot. To me there is nothing more magical then that first kiss. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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RebeccaJoy Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 35 |
This is beautiful. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes sometimes thats all that is left is a memory of a kiss...enjoyed ~Victoria~
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is absolutely poetry in motion Michael. so very beautiful ======================= when the last fade of a kiss takes its place upon the wind when it falls to the earth bringing with it the perfect sound when it reaches your heart your memories remain so clear that bit of pleasure you have that follows you through the years =========================== Mine heart to ever recall this bliss not even the passage of time could dismiss Forever this shall be my undying insist ... caress of thy lips in sweet reminisce merciful remembrance grants me this sweet exsist ... engraved on my soul ... thine unending kiss  I'm hanging on your every word |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...so many reasons to realize how very special this is.... what a wonderful read... |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Beautiful...... As Always Jenn E |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful writing. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Enjoyed this very much, written with great tenderness and feeling. Regards, Olias. |
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