Open Poetry #14 |
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Angel of the Night. . . |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA ![]() |
*Gallery Reading Room* Angel of the night hold me in your arms and cover me with your wings guide me to your dreams and let my tender heart sing Angel of the night take me to your heart and heal me with your love house me in your soul and clothe me like those above Angel of the night kiss me with your lips and fill me with your heat hold my heart in dreams and make my life complete ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - I know that your angel is on the way my friend, just hang loose, she'll arrive. Very well done writing Sven. BC |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Sven this is so soft and sweet, a request from your heart. If I should see your angel I promise to send her your way. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very sweet sven... ![]() ~Victoria~
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
filled with romantic longing! |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sven, This is beautiful. Great writing. ![]() Dawn |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sven, this is soooo beautiful! It will happen, it will! ![]() Sauni Sauni :) |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Sven what a sweet lovely piece you've penned here....I guess that even an Angel of the night can't resist such wonderful words.....I know as I can't resist such a romantic piece.......love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Angel_of_Music Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 35Sanger, TX USA |
Gaurdian of the dark set my soft wings free let me rest beneath your cloak hold me in your arms and we will fly. Gaurdian of the dark whisper sunsets and delay the rising of light at midnight will you love me with a touch? Gaurdian of the night I'll unfurl my wings and "kiss you with my lips and fill you with my heat hold your heart in dreams and make your life complete" "In sleep he sang to me...in dreams he came...that voice which calls to me, and speaks my name..." |
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pamela08 Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 27California,USA |
you are not the only one still looking for their angel...but i promise to keep a look out for you true beauty comes from within not from without |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet...and touching piece...beautiful writing sven ![]() ![]() i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sven, Wonderful piece. I like this very much. Poeminister |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sven this is amazing poetry! Always a treat to read your work! |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
what a beautiful ![]() ![]() |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Stunning....Sven....always lovely from your pen... ![]() Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Angelic and yet dreamy... what a poem. I really enjoyed the read. |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hold my heart in dreams make my life complete now you have expressed my longing beautifully... ![]() |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Sir Sven, my friend, you are indeed king of romance... regards, sudhir |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you so much everyone. . . I'm so glad that you enjoyed this, and that I was able to speak to your hearts. . . special thanks to Angel of Music for her wonderful poetic response, to faterider for telling me that I expressed his longing. . . and of course to Sudhir, for crowning me once again. . . ![]() ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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