The softness of your hands

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Open Poetry #14

The softness of your hands

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-30 07:48 PM

The softness of your hands,
have contributed to my demands.
I want to have you each night.
Desire is difficult to withstand.
With your kisses,
I've learned to speak,
voicing my love to you has been easier,
every time I indulge in you.
Controlling this passion is difficult.
But I know I have to,
because to love you like I want you,
would only scare you away.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 05-30-2001).]

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-30 07:51 PM

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-05-30 07:53 PM

I doubt that you would scare anyone away walker. . .

this just fills the page with passion. . . great job. . .

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JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-05-30 10:44 PM

Intense desire yet control...intriging combination. One I doubt I'll ever master. Well done!

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

4 posted 2001-06-05 02:13 PM

well written and i love this one

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-06-05 02:37 PM

(smiles) Oh, dear friend, with a beautiful tender love like yours, you could never scare your love away, your love would desperately want to have you! (sigh) I know that feeling where it's hard to control passion; I've been feeling very lovesick lately as I continue to hold onto my passion for loving a girl, but in the end, I know it's all worth it and her soft hands will always be over you! (sigh) You are a true romantic, sweet Walker! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-06-06 03:02 AM

Very desireous passions flowing...beautiful write.

Poeminister

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

7 posted 2001-06-06 03:15 AM

a passionate poem... reach for her... good luck.

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