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ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

0 posted 2001-05-30 03:20 PM

For some moments are lifetimes
  In framing others mold dreams
    Too real instants in knowing

Harvest time nears perfection
  A culmination moments  fulfilled design
    Rearing head  gainst hail wind  gloaming sight
      Vital health of great field bends with all
        Every and swirl of winds even unto Heaven
          Sent storms no shadows to conceal
            The value of their souls touch breathes

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

[This message has been edited by ArticulatedSigh (edited 05-30-2001).]

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

1 posted 2001-05-30 03:25 PM

It's beautifull, a little remark to my opinion, keep the right side straight, so one can easily read from the top down.

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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-05-30 03:36 PM

Just a beautiful job! Thanks!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-05-30 03:40 PM

You craft these surpassingly well. Enjoyed the read.

PM

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-05-30 03:41 PM

Welcome!!

I liked this very much

SEA

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-05-30 03:46 PM

This is marvelous, and the sideways approach to the acrostic does not deter me from reading this again and again!

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Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-05-30 03:54 PM

Welcome to passions, you made a very good entrance with this acrostic....excellent done.

Charisma

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

7 posted 2001-05-30 04:12 PM

Lovely!

Corinne

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-05-30 07:44 PM

great job with this one. . . acrostics aren't easy to do. . . I'm wondering why do you have the extra spaces in lines two and three of the second stanza??? Are those pauses? Just wondering. . .

welcome. . . I know that you'll like it here. . .

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ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

9 posted 2001-05-31 01:24 AM

thank you all very much for your kind words. And the "slanted" approach ius meant ro reinforce the theme of the hatverst as the fields become more and more clear.

Also the spaces are pauses indeed. Space as punctuation.

Thanks again

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

10 posted 2001-05-31 03:14 AM

bump

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