Open Poetry #14 |
Nothing Like It |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nothing like it Awesome are the shimmering bright…that spill across the northern lights. Spreading zany colored hues…that mesmerize the mind in views. A banding done by nature’s hand…astonishing and more then grand A mystic flight of ghostly flare…that magic’s up the artic air. A butterfly that’s dressed in gay…spinning round the Milky Way Yet I stood as if quite still…breathing frost that fell in spill. While wonders of celestials sky…filled the empty of my eye. That gives to us an optic rare…for all to see and all to stare. Allowing me with gleaners gleam…a misty gleam of dreamers dream. A wellspring and a wishing well…a magic loom to fly a spell I lift my arms to heavens bright…and wish upon this beauties light To take me up to graces door…where I could dream of evermore. And I have flown a spell or two…captured by this wondrous view A butterfly in gracious light…that flew within its spacious bright It’s here I found a magic way…to nullify a tragic stay. And never have I matched its touch…except for love or such of such. It’s something that I recommend…just an offer, friend to friend Sigh yourself, a butterfly…and fly the northern lights red eye. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love to read about those Norhern lights, Seymour. Kathleen Blake |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Awesome are the shimmering bright…that spill across the northern lights. Spreading zany colored hues…that mesmerize the mind in views. A banding done by nature’s hand…astonishing and more then grand A mystic flight of ghostly flare…that magic’s up the artic air. A butterfly that’s dressed in gay…spinning round the Milky Way Yet I stood as if quite still…breathing frost that fell in spill. While wonders of celestials sky…filled the empty of my eye. That gives to us an optic rare…for all to see and all to stare. ===================================== I've said it before and will say it again I'm sure.... the view thru your eyes is SO much cooler. Yer a beautiful man *S* *winkiewinkie* me I'm hanging on your every word |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You made me recall my Aurora write...but then this is so much....more.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Irish, Big thanks. Sunshine, Thanks for the read. *L* JM, Georgious pictures, kind words from a lovely butterfly. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Popping this beauty to the top ... 'A mystic flight of ghostly flare…that magic’s up the artic air.' *Loving the thought of 'magic's up' ! Wonderful illusionary aura throughout this one. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So beautiful So perfect Liz |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I had no idea when I clicked onto this poem title that I would be under the aurora again, on a warm early summer evening, in the land of the midnight sun. Last winter presented us with some reasonably good auroras here in the "Interior" of Alaska, but I did not capture a single image on paper. Thanks for doing such a fine job. Midnitesun |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Sorry I can't pop you up, but your already at the top of my list. *L* Elisabeth, Thank you sweet poet. Sy Midnitsun, The aurors I was writing about, lived some sixty years ago. But I am sure they are just as beautiful today. Thank you for the read. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've always wanted to see them, Seymour... your words took my imagination where my eyes may never visit.... Beautiful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, They are exactly like JM's pictures. Even more beautiful when you stand under them. *L* Sy |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
beautiful poem an photo's too |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sigh yourself, a butterfly..... words to dream by....enjoyed ~Wynter |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Watersigh6, Glad you enjoyed both, thank you. Nakd, Thank you for the sweet comment. *L* |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, I have not had the pleasure of seeing them for myself but you made them sound so wonderous and beautiful, this is true poetry at its best I enjoyed very much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, And I surely love you too. Thank you sweet for the read and comp. *L* Sy |
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