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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Almost Forgotten ... ~*Marge Tindal*~ Out of nowhere you came Sneaked right up on me A tear from so long ago I'd almost forgotten I cried you Touching memories within a teardrop I remembered how good it was before it wasn't anymore I'm thankful we had the time to write memories of one another But, please, don't come 'round too often cause I don't know what I'm gonna do with you now ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marge sometimes those old memories come back uninvited...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
They are the sneakiest little devils, those gasps of yesteryear.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"But, please, don't come 'round too often cause I don't know what I'm gonna do with you now" Amazing how that can keep on affecting you long after it's over....ah that tricky thing called love! I love it Marge! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Marge you describe these memorizing feelings so well in a few words..... excellent as always ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This was very much enjoyed, my friend... such an amazing feeling to read what you write... regards, sudhir |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, I love this one it's one of those memories that trickle down and pool in your heart. Look inside the tear love, it's full of love, and this is full of beauty, even if its whistful beauty. Absolutely excellent writing love Take care always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ They do, love ... at the most unsuspecting moments. Karilea~ Yes ... they're like that alright. ETHome~ But it's never really over, is it ? Charisma~ *Hugging* you in thanks. Sudhir~ Ahhhh ! You read my heart.  MarshaLove~ I love it when memories gather me in gentle recall. Love to all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I think all those 'pasts' make up a piece of who we are today. The good and the not-so-good memories will always reside in our heart, right where they belong! Great expression, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you for your perspective ... total agreement here ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
you have such a true gift an i am happy an i enjoy it so much  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Nice try! You never get rid of those little suckers, never! Nice poem though. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Only number 12 this time Have I mentioned that I really like your work? I really like your work! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KelliKay~ Thank you always for your sweet replies. Mysteria~ LOL ! I think someone put my longitude/latitude in memory's flight simulator~ Those little recalls just keep zeroing in on me. InterLoper~ Now serving 'thank you' to #12 ...  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"A tear from so long ago I'd almost forgotten I cried you" Sometimes we forget the tear but not its bitter taste....... How I wish we can forget them all..... Thank you for such a touching poem **************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedMelody~ Oh, hon ... I feel the tears of memory at the oddest moments ... and feel the sweetness that they bring. Well, that's my story ... and I'm sticking to it.  Thank you for the read~ Welcome again ~ to Passions ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, then there are times the old memories make you smile and cry at the same time. Sometimes a memory will come and you just stay in that thought all day not knowing what to do with yourself...but to just feel it. Whatever it may be, happy or sad. Great write as always. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ You sometimes make me feel that I've written just for you. That's a nice feeling. Yes ... the tears very often bring a smile of sweet remembering. I truly never mind the tears when they fall for someone I've loved. *Hugs* to you, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
very nice, Marge, when all is said and done, the good memories are all that we really want, so take them and smile softly with the rememberance...gentle smile |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
oh how I know this so well, and how some of those misplaced memories can haunt you....peace to you, and hugs as well.... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--there is no almost in forgotton...memories come, they come. Hugs! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you expressed my sentiments perfectly...except that i haven't yet gotten the strength to write about it... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Thank you for the gentleness of your reply. GreenEyes~ *Hugs* ... those memories return time after time, as though they need to remind us that they are worth remembering. Martie~ And then they come again - from out of a clear blue night. Love you, my friend. Kaile~ I wish you the strength to pen it in time. Thank you for the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I remembered how good it was before it wasn't anymore And there, you've described my entire thinking process these days (punctuated with periodic screams of WHY? *G*) I like this, Margie, gal... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ I know ... Always remember - that in a remember ... someone else has the same good memories to ponder also ... And in some quiet moment ... whether they want to admit it or not ... they do remember ... That's only fair, isn't it ? *Hugs* sent your way, sweetie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I miss this lady and the wisdom in her poetry. A |
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