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Open Poetry #14

Adam

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

0 posted 2001-05-29 02:52 PM

Contented Adam
Silent with woodland creatures
Harmony filled years
One Word once spoken aloud
Hermit Adam lives alone

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-05-29 02:55 PM

Well done! I love the presentation!

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-05-29 02:56 PM

Two for the price of one! Bravo!

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

3 posted 2001-05-29 03:05 PM

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Sunshine
Thanks for reading, this was based on a short story I once read.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-05-29 04:02 PM

this is very cool....I wish I could do that

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-05-29 04:54 PM

I'm sorry, but I don't get it. It must be a certain form, teach me, please.

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2001-05-29 10:39 PM

I love the dual message...appeals to the Gemini in me I suppose...hehehe

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

7 posted 2001-05-30 08:49 AM

SEA,   Living alone is lonely.
VAS,   My intent is a Tanka (5-7-5-7-7 syllables)
Paula Finn,   I'm glad you can see more than just words.

Thanks to all.
Melton

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