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Sorry........(acrostic)
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Sorry........(acrostic) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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She had to let go Or loose herself completely to the Romance of you Reality simply won't let her ~ Yet sometimes.....she dreams...... ~SEA~ *something for a friend* |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sometimes we have to let go...but not to dreaming. Wonderful write. Poeminister |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
well said, one of the most powerful acrostics I've ever read! |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
Sometimes we are forced to let go whether we want to or not......thank god for dreams. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have never tried that style but you've done very well here with it! Letting go is never easy. keep up the good work! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Good one. Dreams are for dreaming. You have to live with reality. Melton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Probably the best sorry I've seen in a long time.... Well done SEA! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful Sea excellent work as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PM~ that's it exactly  thank youVAS~ thank you, that is very nice of you Jill, yes, thank you Ethome~ thank you 2dalimit~ yes, thanks Sunhine~ thank you Charisma~ so good to see you thank you ~SEA |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Like this one Great Sea To the library it goes A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Didn't know this type of rhyme was called acrostic. Did a lot of those in my own language, but now I have to try in English. Really enjoyed it. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I remember a line from "Love Story" that said: "Being in love is never having to say you're sorry." I thought that was a bunch of bull. Your work made it even more untrue. Write on, gal! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i could totally identify with this one but at the same time, i decided changing the reality might be a good idea, but on the other hand, some people just can't or won't do that and that certainly is their preogative, but on the same hand, dreaming is good, but then again, fantasy is a whole lot of fun but also, reality is a whole lot funner!! ain't it? *wink* lol... oh geesh... i rambled again... leave it to doreen to respond to a simple acrostic written with such style and grace with a few well worked words .... with a long ramble about reality, fantasy, decisions, changes, and all that sorta stuff..... whatever am i talking about? who the hell knows? certainly not me.... if i figure it out, maybe i'll write a poem about it... oh but i already did!! no wait! i didn't!! i was trying to write 2 companion pieces... one called "the trouble with reality" and the other called, "the trouble with fantasy" but i never finished them!!! because i couldn't tell them apart!!! *wink* teehee awwww geez.... still rambling aren't i? i guess that says something about how your work inspired my thinking or dreaming or fantasizing or imagining things... ROFL...or something... i'm so s o r r y ! ! ! ! ! great poem, btw!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, I can totally identify with this, sometimes it takes a lot of grace to tell fantasy from reality., a well thought out piece, SEA Kathleen Blake |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
great write SEA  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you threw a punch with a few well-chosen words..and that is why i liked |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Just beautiful. Sweet dreams. |
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