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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-05-20 09:47 AM

Implanted Thoughts

From my heart I give a part of me
in sleepness nights of you.
The candle always glows in dark
when thinking thoughts of two.
The symphony that's played inside
the treasured moments of,
Will never be forgotten
in these memories of love.

I wilt at times, in warmth of you
on road of traveled time.
Alone I sit, and wonder at
these words for you I rhyme.
In fear no more, not hesitant
the answers seem to clear
The questioning, implanted thoughts,
releasing one last tear.

I sit between two candles now
appearing in it's glow,
A shadowed phase, veiled in dark
in emptiness of know.
If eyes I close, to see you there
in Wynter's flowers sown,
In recess of the morning light
your seeds become my own.

A day without the reign of you
leaves much to be desired.
In silence now your words are heard
then stilled too, are the fires,
that burned, emblazened you to mind
that thrilled, enticed me so.
The myst of you has lifted and
my life has lost it's glow.

So in the candlelight, a must
I fill my nights with rhyme
And kiss away the memories
of once upon a time...

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-20-2001).]

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
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1 posted 2001-05-20 09:59 AM

nakdthoughts,

OOhhh how haunting this was to me. Beautifully written! What a lonely feel it has... ~hugs to you~. I hope that if this is based on real events it changes for you.

TaraB

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-05-20 10:19 AM

Wynter~
I like ...

'If eyes I close, to see you there
in Wynter's flowers sown,
In recess of the morning light
your seeds become my own.'

Plant new memories ... then reap the harvest, sweet poet.
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-05-20 07:20 PM

Especially tickled by the third stanza--and like the term "implanted thoughts"--lovely as always! Nice rhythm to this and you always manage to convey a sad sensuality that is uniquely yours!

HoldingBack
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since 2001-05-20

Posts 2

4 posted 2001-05-20 07:24 PM

This poem was great! This is the first I have read here, and what a great first impression.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-05-20 08:09 PM

this is me tonight. . . thank you Maureen. . .

well written. . .

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Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-05-30 05:01 PM

Wondering where I was when you posted this beauty.....fabulous write my friend love these lines....love all of it.

So in the candlelight, a must
I fill my nights with rhyme
And kiss away the memories
of once upon a time...

((hugs))
Charisma

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-05-30 06:59 PM

Don't kiss away too many memories. They school us for the future.

Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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