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Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-28 04:51 PM

a mist swells through fog
trees drink water from above
worn trails lie empty

"I am not now that which I have been."

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

1 posted 2001-05-28 04:53 PM

love the picture an the poem

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-05-28 04:54 PM

Magnificent Haiku. The snapshot in time was perfect and captivated me. Thank you so much. It is indeed beautiful. {{{BIG HUGS}}}Much love to you from me.

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Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-05-28 05:52 PM

Startime and Watersign6: thank you so much for reading and enjoying the haiku.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-05-29 10:35 PM

Wow! It is like you took a picture out my back yard, I am serious, and so of course I think this is about the most beautiful thing I have read and seen for a while, great jobber on this Mabe!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-05-29 11:36 PM

oooh, the photo and the poem make me think of when I'm walking in the woods of the Oregon Trail

so much has been seen
by the eyes of the forest
yet the trail appears empty
surely, in truth,
it is full
sated with history

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

6 posted 2001-05-30 12:03 PM

Well done!

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

7 posted 2001-05-30 12:05 PM

Wonderful haiku. Nicely done.

Poeminister

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-05-30 06:52 AM

Julian~
Your lovely inspirational Haiku is greatly enjoyed.

On the forest beds
Footprints of another time
Marking well-worn paths

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-05-30 08:11 AM

Lovely, looks like the paths in the woods in my backyard.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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