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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-05-28 01:31 PM


                 “ALL THE WAY TO PARADISE”
                                    by
                              Bill Charles
                                    ~~~~
Come with me and listen, about a special place I found,
        where my words that you hear,
                will only be true…
I’ll whisper softly into a tender ear, sensuous thoughts,
        and they will travel to your soul,
                as I continue…

We’ll walk through the meadow, to the tall oak trees,
        where branches and leaves blow,
                in the soft breeze…
This is where I will take you, and lie with one so fair,
        it is daring but also enchanting,
                and will become a moment, to seize…

No troubles or grief will you have, for it’s my adoration,
        that brings me to you, with all the closeness,
        I will share…
And as my embrace holds you tight, you’ll feel the magic,
        of the presence of one,
                taking you slowly, into this affair…

For my thoughts and words, are being said only for you,
        so come with me, don’t hesitate,
                for it’s I, you entice…
So take my hand and follow me, into the gentle night,
        and we will be together, as one,
                “All The Way To Paradise”…
                                   ~~~~


© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-28 01:35 PM


*sigh* ah yes, I remember well the sweet romance of your poems, Bill. I am so glad I have come back to read them again. Tender and wonderful to read. Thank you so much for the pleasure of them.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-05-28 02:07 PM


No troubles or grief will you have, for it’s my adoration,
that brings me to you, with all the closeness,
I will share…

so beautiful Bill..

Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-05-28 02:09 PM


this is truly lovely, Bill.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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4 posted 2001-05-28 04:02 PM


ahhhh this is beautiful.....I enjoy your romantic poems much...


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


Victoria
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5 posted 2001-05-28 04:10 PM


as always lovely and romantic bill..

                     ~Victoria~


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Pablo Picasso


Nan
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6 posted 2001-05-28 09:37 PM


Paradise never sounded so good, BCI... Very nice indeed...
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7 posted 2001-05-29 06:56 PM


I have always loved the way that you write romance. . . makes me a little jealous!!!  LOL  

maybe I just need the right inspiration Bill???  

Great job!!

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8 posted 2002-03-23 07:09 PM




(smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, may you forever hold her hand and take her to paradise of true love forever happily! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is magical! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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