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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-05-28 02:52 AM

I'll take the night, thanks
With its ever constant arms,
To wrap around me as I'm reaching.
I'll take the night, please
Where my dreams come alive,
And where my passion seems less shy.
I'll take the night alone though,
For I can bear no longer,
The insistent will of trying to believe.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-05-28 02:59 AM

the night should not be faced alone. . . much better with someone. . .

excellent words. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-05-28 02:17 PM

So sad!
"I'll take the night alone though,
For I can bear no longer,
The insistent will of trying to believe."

Don't stop believing there is someone out there just for you.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-05-28 05:08 PM

Sven,
Sometimes the solace of the night speaks, and it is sometimes especially important that we be alone in that exchange. Thank you for reading.

Inot2B,
No worries. These words are just me trying to release clutter.

Thank you for telling me what you felt from it and for reading.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-05-28 08:25 PM

Oh, that last line stabbed right through my heart. I agree about the night. Strong writing.
Sandra

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2001-05-28 09:01 PM

Always believe.....

this I enjoyed...

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

6 posted 2001-05-28 09:14 PM

This is really good.. it says so much..the night does suit our moods.. and sometimes aloness has advantage.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-05-28 09:34 PM

sometimes it's so hard to believe!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

8 posted 2001-05-28 10:25 PM

to seek the night is to become one with the flow of the night breeze and the gentle southern night..I saw a lightning bug..you are not alone, my dear friend, to believe, is to only feel the breeze..with a gentle smile...You do strike deep, you know

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

9 posted 2001-05-28 10:27 PM

powerful...i truly enjoyed the way you have wrote this...the last verses were amazing...great job jenn

...and thanks for the read...

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-28-2001).]

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