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Floating Into You
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Floating Into You |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Floating Into You The bluest skies had deepened, dark the rumbling settled in. Rolling thoughts of you, had I as clouds began to thin. They took upon themselves, the shades in pinks of cotton soft. The blending of the grays and blues then rainbow arched aloft. Formations changing, drifting slow as tears were misting, light. The sun was peeking, once again the palest maize, tonight. A world of pleasure floated in, as stormy one departs, My thoughts of you are resting near pillowed by my heart. Caressed am I, as night descends fulfilled by nature's gifts. These memories send me to dream into your arms, I drift. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely Wynter...enjoyed very much  HUGSS~Victoria~
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Oh, this is VERY NICE, beginning to end, Wynter. Enjoyed this very much. Thank you. Krawdad |
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pamela08 Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 27California,USA |
you cannot judge this poem because it is to good...i look foward to read more of your work true beauty comes from within not from without |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful thoughts and flow in this piece. Excellent writing. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent flow Wynter. . . I really liked the way that you used it here. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Victoria, Krawdad, Pamela, Poeminister, & Sven..we had some of the strangest thunderstorms and it made me write, while hearing them...and then after going outside and seeing such a beautiful changing soft sky.I kept telling my neighbor look ,look isn't that beautiful and she was wondering why I kept sending her looking skyward until she saw the rainbow form...I love the sky when it has erupted in colors thank you for reading *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
love this poem it is excellent from start to finish so good i am reading it again |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* elegance in beautiful poem fashion. Thank you this was such beautiful reading. I love it. {{{BIG HUGS}}}Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
enjoyed the colorful metaphors very much, Maureen Kathleen Blake |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, very beautiful. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - drift you may, drift you might, but drift into these open arms, tonight..... BC |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
lovely write... regards, sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love the title and the verses of reflecting that you write so well. Beautiful soft and warm write! |
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