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Directions |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
DIRECTIONS I was lost and wandering Days came and swiftly disappeared In the everlasting haze Then I met you and I whispered: ‘Can you show me the direction?’ Your smiling eyes talked to me For the first time ‘I’m your direction’ The sun was hot and pale In a green dale And purple flowers Spending odour without purpose Your smiling eyes And all this sunshine Surrounding me I see only you |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
enjoyable read,thanks for sharing  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Then I met you and I whispered: ‘Can you show me the direction?’ Your smiling eyes talked to me For the first time ‘I’m your direction’ Love these lines very much, well written. Titia |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Agust~ Very nicely said. I enjoyed your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
thank you so much for liking, I needed this now! AP |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
solid writing here. Kathleen Blake |
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