Open Poetry #14 |
Arched Neath Pleasures |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Arched Neath Pleasure Knelt there beside me Lips brushing my face Gentle stroke of hands Across the silken lace Held closely in dreams Long for nothing more Tender kisses to wear Gown falls to the floor Arched neath pleasure Onto the canopied bed Scented candles aglow Flowing desires spread Naked passions shape Into dreams come true Creative juices flowing In the closeness of you Hope ©2001 |
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joycerogers Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 83Texas |
That, my dear, is extremely beautiful....got any mo? O Morning...wrap yourself around me today. Let me experience the peace I see in you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most lovely, succinct, write! Well done....and I ditto....more, please! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
tastefully sensually |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Joyce, glad you enjoyed yes I have written over 800 , although not all are romantic and sensual Hope ....................... Hey sunshine , I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading this one Hope |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HopeS~ Very nicely done. Passionately graceful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice one Hope...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A cusp of communion, beautifully done! write on Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Hope,,,,the more I read this the better I like it. sweet.... passionate...mildly erotic.. what a way of starting my day thank you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This deserves to go back to the top ... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 05-21-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautifully sensual and romantic. Enjoyed this muchly. Poeminister |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Hope...Must agree with Interloper. Bob |
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