Open Poetry #14 |
Glass Houses...LMAO a cliche (thanks to Sven) |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
People who live in glass houses shouldnt throw stones Or air their dirty laundry in public Your love is like a rolling stone gathering no moss along the way Live and let live is NOT a truism you live by You want your cake and you want to eat it too Its all take and no give with you And history just repeats itself every time you walk in the door So I think you should make like a banana and just split 'Cuz whats good for the goose its ALWAYS great for the gandar And you've already kissed this one goodbye.... HEHEHEHE!!!!!!!!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula my sweet poetic sister, have I told you today how truly great you are. This is utterly firstclass you know I love this don't you. Because if you don't know by now that I really adore you then there's no hope for me. Love and warm stuff Oh btw this is an amazing write from you love, just in case you didn't know I Love This Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
WoooHooo! way to write Paula |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Paula, Paula, Paula. . . LOL. . . . . . I think that you might have taken the prize here with this one. . . LOL Cliches be damned!! LOL ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ You are just the greatest thing going ! My favorite poem of all time of yours. LOL ! And I mean that from the bottom of my heart ! In all sincerity, please take this compliment seriously. When I grow up I want to be just like you. You just take the cake with this one ! Ta-Ta ... and all that jazz ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Too cute...nothing to teach you.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paula, With that mouth full you need a drink. Enjoyed |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Should've seen this coming...blindsided by humor! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great cliche' poem Paula my dear poet friend! |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
LOL! Enjoyed. |
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theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
Fine as hair on a frog! Thanks for a smile. theLadypoet |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marsha... you go right to my head girl...thank you Watersign6...thank you so much Sven...ooooooooo you mean I won? COOL COOL..oh wait ahem I gotta act cool hows this? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Geez Sven got me allllllll excited hehehe Marge...Oh LOL...you are jsut too cute Lady Sunshine...now I always learn from you lady Seymour....yeaahhhh lol....all in one breath too JLR...yep yep you shoulda...hehehe ethome...lol it was fun to write sweetie... Temptress...twas sure fun to play with theLadyPoet...LMAO thank you |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
within those humourous observations there is a lot of sense. Thanks for making me smile while reading this "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Great one....love this cliche...as its quite original....outstanding funny piece my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Brian....Im glad I could make you smile... Charisma...thank you I am glad you liked it |
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