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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Fate's Wings  In the paradise of poetry we are wing to butterfly dazzle to kaleidoscope glowing star to Luna sky in this chapel of holy union sailing the serenity of love dewdrops cascade from eyes pure as timeless dove romancing emotion of our souls o'er the arch of rainbow bliss golden promise of heaven's radiance awakening within a kiss of divine dance of delight building sandcastles in time kindred soulmates, angels of feather that awe to harmony and rhyme sacred vows of a groom and his bride endless spirit of lovers wild cherishing this gift of fate such fervor of a child adrift on ovations of rosepetals and lullabies of ocean ballet carried by this priceless bond across enrapture of Cupid bay whils't wing caresses wing enwrapped in the lips of breeze on the whispered song of destiny sweet supple reveries blessed by days of the hourglass honey suckled dreams at play forever within a moment this love so tender shall stay through gingered oasis of dawn flying together, ever free man and woman...heart to heart for the rest of eternity  ~*By Melissa Honeybee*~  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is beautifully done, Melissa. Your imagery is magical--I loved the phrase "rainbow bliss."  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
And I was so busy replying that I forgot to save this one. Duh... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is beyond terrific! I loved it Sauni Sauni :) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Oh, my ! This is simply stunningly beautiful. What a glorious talent of beauty you have. This may well be my favorite of yours to date ! Resplendantly lovely !  *Hugs* to you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it really is stunning! Great job! Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow Melissa. . . this is excellent. . . the words flow from your heart with such ease in this one. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, The beauty in your writing leaves me in awe. Simply lovely TaraB |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Missy Beautifully done. I like this very much. PM "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You've all made me smile, thank you so much for your great replies to this poem~Take care, Melissa~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Meliss, youve woven so many lovely images and phrases into a poetic fairy tale of romance this is beautiful, and its so good to see your name here again very well done poetess honeybee  I'm hanging on your every word |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Melissa....this is a joy to read - and I love the graphics you used. This is definitely a keeper!!!  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
honey suckled dreams at play forever within a moment this love so tender shall stay through gingered oasis of dawn beautifully images. wonderful read "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, WOW, You have packed so much meaning in to such a compressed space, it bears re-reading over and over again to open up all the mental pictures you have crafted here. A beautiful tapestry of Love and devotion! I am definately saving this one in my library to visit it often. Did I say WOW? Peace unto you my friend, Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 05-27-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
outstanding work....beautiful painted words Melissa. Truly a lovely gem. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Melissa Honeybee your such a talent to read cant wait to indulge in more this poem i do adore |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melybee...it's been a while since I've seen your writings.... welcome home, little one... |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
oh, Melissa, dear poetess divine, the exquiste beauty you have created here of the bliss of two soul mates, is beyond words to describe...BRAVO! Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy this is so awesome, girl! thanks for sharing this link with me, you write of love so wonderously love ya, see ya soon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
gorgeous melissa...and love the pics...wonderfully done.. ~Victoria~
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Absolutely lovely, Melissa, did you or someone you know just get married? This is so wonderful in all aspects! btw, I have several in the first 200 and some in the 2nd 200 that have had only 1 response so they have sunk down quickly. I don't think it's because they're bad poems, though. Some are silly, though. heh heh heh I'm speaking of Open #14. |
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