Open Poetry #14 |
Luck (tanka) |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Luck How lucky am I? To have your precious kind heart wanting to love me. Your soul enveloping mine Your love wrapping me in warmth TaraB [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 05-20-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This one makes me smile. It is very nice to see you so happy these days! Wonderful write. All writing comes |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lone Wolf - Thank you! I am happy again It took some time..and some luck.. but I am I'm glad it made you smile. TaraB |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
How sweet...how lucky am I to read! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
JLR - Aww thank you! I'm glad you liked it TaraB |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
beautiful way to show your special someone you don't take them for granted!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ Wish on lucky star Coming true in blink of eye Bringing smiles to light Upon your face in content Wishes are for coming true ! *It IS sheer pleasure to sense your happiness. Go gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
VAS - There is no worries about that.. I know how lucky I am Thanks for coming in Marge - Thank you Marge! I am much better than I was I'm glad you enjoyed |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
it's not how lucky YOU are, my dear, it's how lucky _I_ am... but what a beautiful way to tell me you feel the same -napalm PS.... *BUMP*
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dave - Thanks for the bump! hehe And this poem doesn't come close to saying how I feel |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Rosepetals--Lovely Tanka. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nice to read such good thoughts from you again. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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