Open Poetry #14 |
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Fortress Of Ice |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
I can feel the chill settle as the ice once again begins to crystalize across this heart slowly. Once it had seemed to take way to long for me to allow the warmth to regain access to my heart until...... until that day when you reached past my heart and warmed my soul with your love. Now time has changed what once was, into something that might be again..... and I fear~ I fear that with each passing day the chill will prevail as this ice again forms, crystalizing, covering this heart, protecting it like a shield until...... until perhaps again the warmth will not be able to penetrate this fortress~ this fortress of ice around my heart. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
D Dont build those walls to high, allow the sun to shines its warmth, and always keep your arms ready....when the dove returns it may just need a place to rest it's head.... ![]() ![]() Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My dear friend, you are appreciated far more than you can ever know. Peace, and hugs to you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done donna..nice to see you again ![]() ~Victoria~
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i really enjoyed this one ![]() |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sad and beautiful! |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
Ice foretells oit os mirror prism all its own No thing eases suffering so as ices touch in its minions so many things possible as it freezes the moment that being its gift |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is beautiful and so sad. Just allow them in...you will be glad you did for if you never do you may miss the world. ![]() Sauni Sauni :) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
moving....very moving Kathleen Blake |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the chill only comes when we ourselves are feeling cold. . . let the warmth in my friend. . . let it in. . . heartfelt words. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I hope that never happens. Very well expressed. Poeminister |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
I second what Sven said GS. If his home is where your love is, then he will return. Keep your faith sweet poetess. *s* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all for the well wishes, and for the much needed hugs. Hugs to you all. ~love D~ ![]() On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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