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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

0 posted 2001-05-26 12:27 PM

Rainbow Blessing's

Raindrops falling down
Upon my wanting soul
As I stand mid field
Where wild flowers grow

Alone I am not for given
Freely Mother Nature provides
All for these wanting eyes
Lifting weightiness of my burden

Bounty found in nectar sweet
As birds and bee’s come out to eat
Rain-washes away all impurities
Displaying beautiful colored pansies

Lessons lilies teach me
No toil or spin in their dance
Power retained in fragile stance
Even if sun’s rays out of reach

In my heart feeling refreshed
I becoming completely enmeshed
With nature providing tranquillity
To a wearied soul needing amity

Rainbow arched across nature’s rein
Blessing my spirit with no refrain
Learning to open wide my heart
To the beauty nature so imparts

Now it’s just a question of when
This happy little soul will leave
Cause I’m truly enjoying with glee
Dancing with birds and bees

By, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

1 posted 2001-05-26 12:40 PM

Cerenity,WOW! love this poem,you are good!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-05-26 01:20 PM

Beautiful refreshing piece. Excellent writing.

Poeminister

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-05-26 02:41 PM

"Rainbow arched across nature’s rein
Blessing my spirit with no refrain
Learning to open wide my heart
To the beauty nature so imparts"

Ah Cerenity ... from one nature lover to another, this was a much needed and wonderfully refreshing stroll with you, much enjoyed these sentiments today!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-05-26 02:56 PM

Cerenity~
Such a refreshing drink of rainbowed hue
caught within the ink of you.

Lovely, sweet little poet.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-05-26 03:19 PM

nicely written indeed cerenity, enjoyed

well done

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2001-05-26 03:32 PM

your words even make this dreary day glow

beautiful images and even if it is raining here the view is still beautiful.

Bounty found in nectar sweet
As birds and bee’s come out to eat
Rain-washes away all impurities
Displaying beautiful colored pansies

"you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

7 posted 2001-05-26 03:46 PM

This sounds like a place I would love to go. You have taken me there in my mind and made my body long to go. Enjoyed.

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

8 posted 2001-05-26 03:48 PM

This is really really beautiful! I enjoyed this.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-05-27 12:55 PM

dance on my friend. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

10 posted 2001-05-27 11:23 PM

Hi,

All of you are so sweet, I have really had to fight with my writing lately, just does not flow out so easy, so thank you for your kind replys,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2001-05-30 04:38 PM

Rainbow arched across nature’s rein
Blessing my spirit with no refrain
Learning to open wide my heart
To the beauty nature so imparts

beautifully done.....love it Cerenity

((hugs))
Charisma

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