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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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lineally mine the word above it means one thing of descent and heritage, mine but today I take poetic permit and show my linear lines that stretch and stream across my face around my lips and eyes and use them all to smile at you why I’ll trade not my lines I would not give one small, thin dime nor would I give less of my time to say to you I like these lines and with me they shall stay I’ll not pay one to remove or smooth, or even whisk away all these little lines of mine no, with me they stay as they are all by design, refined, all mine, to carry me to grace, sublime I’ve worked quite hard to put them here, these, my lineal lines as you can see there’s no fear in me, of all these finial lines it may be that they show age but when upward turned they don’t show regret, nor rage and they’re mine, all mine they’re mighty fine, these, my little lineal lines |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart, what grace and charm you write YOUR lines in love. Absolutely first class writing, as always love you have written a fabulous piece. Never do you fail, now send me some of your lines and I'll fly again. Take care love and warm stuff Puck  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lines of light...beautifully written. Poeminister |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ The mapping produced by a smile - carries me many a mile.   Wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Here, here! I too, earned every single little crevice and I wear them proudly. Now ask me if I loved this one? You bet I did! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
as they are all by design, refined, all mine, to carry me to grace, sublime I’ve worked quite hard to put them here, these, my lineal lines as you can see there’s no fear in me, of all these finial lines And you should be proud of these lines, of all the lines you write. "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
what a splendid poem. Yes lines denote the smiles that made them |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Your poem with grace and beauty, for one like myself to behold. Beautiful read. My faith is but the size my mustard seed. I'll turn the other cheek in my love for mankind - not pride. |
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