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Dancer's Sigh
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Dancer's Sigh |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Dancer's Sigh Fall into my heart and take me to your bed Through the warming panes, morning light spies a silhouette Watch me unfold as your hand traces my body A linen draped stage, where passion takes her bow Kiss me and summon the deeply buried sighs aching to be heard Two dancers have brought seduction to her knees Touch me, the way a man touches the woman he yearns for Remnants, the taste of tongues in breathless places Make love to me as though we might never have this moment again Another town, another bed...another song. A Whisper's Caress & Coal Surrender © 5/19/01 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most delightful duet indeed...kudos to both of you! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sigh !!!! sensually delightful Hope |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Kiss me and summon the deeply buried sighs aching to be heard the above line is fantastic! most of the others make my blood rise to a flushed face |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AWhispersCaress & Coal Surrender~ This is just lovely. In sync rhythm dancing a graceful duet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so sensual and so beautiful  very nicely done!! SEA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely beautiful, a wonderful collaboration of minds. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
on behalf of Coal and myself, I want to thank each of you for the wonderful responses. Coal, thank you to you as well, for your very sensual contribution to this poem. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Thanks to one and all, it's a pleasure to share with you. Coal |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful duet guys. "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have to echo the words of the rest...beautiful duet!! |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Brian, Ethome, thanks for the great comments. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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