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The Female of the species .
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The Female of the species . |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
---------------------------------------------------- When I wrote this poem, I was in a bit of a mood with a particular Woman, and I could only see Women in general as evil . So no women out there take this to heart as I now know it's not true . Feel free to say what you like about this poem, as it is quite unfair in itself . Thanks . ---------------------------------------------------- The Female of the species . The female of the species, Is beautiful fun and bold, Yet the female of the species, Can be 2 faced evil and cold . The fun and immaturity, Has a flip side like a coin, The female of the species, Only wants your groin . We males can help not love them, Even when they are not true, Beware the female my dear boy, She’ll leave you feeling blue . Written by Tom Baker .© 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes its a shame we seem to be drawn to the ones that are not worthy of us.. i wonder why...i guess they hold something within we are looking for..and imperfections that we overlook... ~Victoria~
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thankyou very much Victoria, your reply is so true and very kind . Thanks very much . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
AW....the female spider eats the male.... you were not so far off target.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it works both ways my friend. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well done!!! (But I'm glad you added your disclaimer!) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Yes I think both men and women operate on different wave lengths (not being sexism) men's cruelty is often more open and obvious than women's but as Sven said it works both ways. Enjoyed the read. "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thankyou all, I am glad nobody was to offended by this one . All your words are very kind and wise . Maybe it does work both ways, I just find that although men are quite often very bold and mouthy, women tend to be more low cunning and manipulative etc. Thanks for giving my rather heavy words a chance . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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