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Trina
Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97


0 posted 2001-07-12 05:26 PM


It's supposed to be a special day
it doesn't feel like it though
it feels like an ordinary day
nothing to look forward to
and nothing to think back on

It's supposed to be my day
I'm supposed to be happy
and enjoy my day
but I'm not
and my day is nothing
but crap

It's supposed to be all about me
or at least im supposed to feel
that way
but I don't
and I hate this day

It's not a special day
It's not my day
and it's not all about me
I feel like crap
and I hate this day

It's exactly how I predicted
it would be
and I wanted it to be
different
in so many ways

Instead of it being my best
birthday ever
it feels more like my worst
and I hate it , hate it ,
and can't wait til it's over

I just wanna go back to
every other boring ass day
instead of getting my hopes
up
and then trying to cope
when they fall right down


It's not a special day
It's not my day
It's not all about me
and I hate it and
can't wait until
it's over

© Copyright 2001 Trina - All Rights Reserved
JLR
Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-07-12 07:27 PM


Happy Birthday, Trina!  If I knew how to use all those graphics here...I'd throw you a cyber party.  Sorry, your day isn't feeling special.  I really liked your poem, you expressed how you are feeling very well.  
Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
2 posted 2001-07-12 07:38 PM


Hello Trina,

Welcome to Passions with a rather sad verse though, but maybe we can brighten up your day a bit by throwing in some fun.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY



            

Feel a bit better now?

Titia


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100


[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-12-2001).]

Trina
Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97

3 posted 2001-07-13 04:31 PM


Awww thanx guys, yall are so sweet.You really know how to welcome a person and put a smile on their face. Thanx again

Take care,

Trina

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