Open Poetry #14 |
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Exhaling |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Between the inhale And exhale, Of the short breath Of time we were together, At that moment when I was filled with The essence of you, I did not know Letting you go Would be at once, Both a relief and agony. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
that very, very, very fine line.... well done Sir! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well said my friend. "The agony and the ecstacy" of separation. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes it's like this...James |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Between the inhale And exhale, Of the short breath Of time we were together, Very nicely phrased and captured. I like this a lot. I enjoy being inspired by your minimalism -- a fresh contrast to my usual style. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Beautiful ...... I really enjoyed the quite surrender of this one. Thank you Ron...... ![]() ************************** It's only me.......only me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ewww...for a second I thought this would be about inhalants again. But this is very deftly written...much admiration here! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, how powerfully true this can be, absolutely!!! I think I need to send this to a friend that leads a hope for healing group for survivors of death/divorce and other major stresses on a life. May I? |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Press your lips together softly & blow, all the while remembering..." loved this, Ron/b>... ~Tier |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is VERY well expressed and I know that feeling. Good writing! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I love this one! I know that letting go can be so good yet so bad at the same time...you put it into words so beautifully Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Parting is such sweet sorrow. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well written expression of ambivalence! Enjoyable! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
CPAT, this poem tugs at the heartstrings... Thank you for a great read PoetFriend *~coco~* |
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