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You didn't come
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You didn't come |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan 
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TUM NA AAYE YOU DIDN'T COME Dil main In the heart Ik aas laga kar While to a pin hope on Tari rah tuktay rahey I kept seeing you Hum nay tara intizar kiya I waited for you Saher honay tuk Until it was Dawn Mughur tum na aaey But you didn't come Phir Then Hum ney tumhain yad kiya I recur you Nuzzar aaney tuk Until I see you Mughur tum na aaey But you didn't come Phir bi hum ney tari yad Then after keeping, your recur Dil main basa kar In the heart Tumhain yad katay rahey I kept on recurring you Safar pey janey tuk Until to go to journey Mughar But Tum na aaey You didn't come ~Wasi~ I love to nice poetry. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Is this Urdu? My sister in law visited Pakistan a few years ago and hasn't been the same since. I enjoyed this one. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... the language differences make for someinteresting wording in English that caue me to stop, relook, and think.. I enjoy!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
WC...i enjoyed this...helen |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
to recur one would be to have one reappear.... this is wonderful, Waseem, and very lovely in its intent.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is so sad...and you do this so elegantly!!! I like very much. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good write, though sad |
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