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My Sweet Mother
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My Sweet Mother |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
Mother I pray for my mother My mother is like An angel A ray of light in darkness A moon in the dark night I must pray for my mother Because She is so helpful and good She so sweet and nice Every day She gives me a special treat Oh God! Keep her warm, safe and healthy Give her the pleasure of whole world My mother is the greatest I love her and she loves me ~fatthi~ [This message has been edited by Qumar Fatthi (edited 07-10-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Q? The intent of this is so touching and SWEET!!!   Lovely emotion in this piece! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the way you appreciate your mother...James |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
GREAT Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
zabardast |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very touching honest write. All writing comes |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Nice poem, mothers are very special. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Again zabardast....... |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
zabardast....... waseem and Boshii for zabardast comments...................... and thanxxxxxxxx all others thanxxxxxxx James......... |
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