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Rendezvous
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Rendezvous |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Virginia Salter they come each afternoon dressed in plumage fine coquettishly they take up their whims softened eyes and gentle smiles camouflage their joyous wiles as each reveals her secret, sisterly a tender heart for braunish lad or lips that seek what nature has so succulent an offer to their way dreaming of his eboned eyes heeding ears toward her gentle sighs promising the world and all the moon beguilingly they spin their tease parasols in tranquil breeze pondering the beauty of true love experiences they’ve never had alluring and temptation clad a giggle escapes ebullient glee looking round, they say “Good-bye,” affirming their return when sun is high to chat among the roses after tea © July 8, 2001 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A nice place to chat, no? |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Sounds delightful. Kinda reminds me of Super Bowl Sunday, but less refined and without the tea...... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is so "southern" and I don't know why but I kept imagining birds at tea...shaking my head, I'd better get some coffee... But truly nice visuals here, I was reminded of "To Kill A Mockingbird" when Scout served Tea...you captured it perfectly! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all for reading and responding, some interesting comments here, for certain, esp. LHB, heh heh heh. Of course you don't know what inspired this piece so any remark comes, understandably from your own world view.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great write |
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