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Love
Junior Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 15
All Places Always

0 posted 2001-07-08 11:21 PM

Not long ago but too
   too far away
I was the blood
   pumping undenied
as if all after Ragnarok became
   fulfilled within

Without I screamed
   the thunder
eyes burning cried forth
   the rain

     Everywhere

Melodies light reveled sighs
of sight glimmer hope seeing

Not long ago yet so far
   far away breathed
deeply quiet sighs memoirs
   knowing I within you

moments alive thriving
   eternal bloom
     becoming
       self

Surpassed enough grounded
   free to be released
      glow light
         sight

Believeing eye interior view
   no other review
      I thought in I
         mistake

Broken apart Missed- Take
    actors guild insists
      on payment always
        Act III Hell

No matter blood vessels yawn
     stretch conracting
       tomorrows words
           rehearse

Break in half between scenes
      plummet groundward
        boring down
          further

     Once fire blazing
    now Ice of the World
          AmEye

[This message has been edited by Love (edited 07-08-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-08 11:24 PM

"Not long ago yet so far
   far away breathed
deeply quiet sighs memoirs
   knowing I within you

moments alive thriving
   eternal bloom
     becoming
       self"

wow and Welcome!

I liked this very much

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-07-09 05:34 AM

Welcome! I really like the format you've used here! It creates a thought process for the reader....good work!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-07-09 09:00 AM

Welcome to Passions! A very interesting, indepth read....

Please, check your e-mail for a special message....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-07-09 09:14 AM

very nice.... enjoyed both the form and the content.. looking forward to seeing more from you!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-07-09 09:42 AM

what a very cool poem...
wonderful employ of imagery
interesting vocabulary as well
Welcome to Poetry Land Love
so nice to have you here
I too look forward to more of your creative work.
take care
jm

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

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