Open Poetry #14 |
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With Head Down... ( I hope this is for Wil and not for me. 4th new today, sorry ) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
With Head Down... Virginia Salter I sit and languish wanting to be read and someone’s died I sit and hunger wanting to be fed and someone’s died I watch my words fall down one tear at a time and someone’s died I watch the tears of others not knowing why they’ve come and then, I open my eyes wide enough to see the world goes on and on afar from me the tears have come to those who can see and hear and now I’ve learned the tears they shed are for a loss of one of their own that’s had to hang up his pen and poem not for awhile but for eternity at least from this side of life and vanity we’ve all met a loss more profound than we’d dream for the cup has been taken from our lives with the cream and all we have is the lace within his words we have read and from his heart so truly heard in the flesh, most, if not all, were not blessed to meet our Wilfred Yeats, one of our best yet we stand in mourning for our friend not believing quite fully it is his end simple words lined with humor were quite characteristic of his life his muse, I’m sure lives on in the ink of the dawn and the little touches he has managed to convey will weave themselves into each of our days it’s so easy to stand alone and look inside forgetting to see what’s around and true abide may I be forgiven for my introspective sin as I take time to see where Wilfred’s been. © July 8, 2001 [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-08-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
That's beautiful VAS, and sincere too. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For what you've done, you have all poets heartfelt thanks.... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Wonderfully written Vas. Parker |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Nicely done, Virginia, and thank you. e |
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