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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-07-08 05:59 AM


         
Longwood Gardens courtesy of Victoria

  

You Touched Me


You were there as a friend,
in each moment of need
and you touched me,
as your eyes followed
and my words pressed
your mind.

You brushed me,
with each thought that rested
upon my screen in return;
sometimes with a tenderness
of a read, sometimes  
to embolden me to write my heart
and always to share and
improve upon our poetic thoughts.

In our search for contentment,
I am happy I was shown
this place of passions
and shared it with you
and with the few of us that I knew
would feel the comfort offered
and given in return,
unconditionally.

I saw in you
what many others did and more;
a magic woven
with threads of words to enchant,
drawing one into your world,
a land of romance
with delicate detail
to every sensation.

I wanted to capture you,
your artist look, in eyes
so distinguished and gentle and kind
in youth and in age,
in words and in strength
of a forever friendship.

I shall always wish that time
had remained on our side
and that we could have shared
a few words of friendship
and the viewing pleasures,
at Longwood Gardens.

In my moments of real,
you will remain in my heart
and I will always see you
in the shadow of the moon....

Maureen


*In The Shadow of the Moon*

Autumn's soft breezes whirl round the moon
Our hearts rising croon to the light of the moon

Signs of fall drift round toes as we scuff
Down the beach rough in the shadow of moon

Bright colored leaves, oranges yellows and reds
On the sand they are bled by the silvery moon

Warm for a fall night clothing wouldn't be missed
An extra warm kiss we sway 'neath the moon

Surf lapping lightly, we hardly see foam
The pipers do roam to hide from the moon

Your soft hand in mine, your eyes lit by the stars
With all that is ours we swoon under the moon

In a pile of soft leaves we lay in delight
Kisses in spotlight we're the stars of this moon

A sterling performance not a nuance rehearsed
In each other immersed, it's a true lover's moon

With pledges of love, caresses of signing
Our love is undying, witness the moon


©yosserian
10*14*99

Written for me on my website of M/Moonchild
by Bill, Wilfred Yeats, also known as Yoss, Yosserian and vagrant...who joined me here, when looking for a place to call home for our words...

I am, as many others are, holding you in my thoughts and prayers...your words are timeless and special, Bill.

~Wynter/Maureen/MMoonchild


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II





[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 07-08-2001).]

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Janet Marie
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Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-07-08 08:08 AM


I saw in you
what many others did and more;
a magic woven
with threads of words to enchant,
drawing one into your world,
a land of romance
with delicate detail
to every sensation.

I wanted to capture you,
your artist look, in eyes
so distinguished and gentle and kind
in youth and in age,
in words and in strength
of a forever friendship.
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yes...this is him...
beautiful tribute ... thank you for sharing it and his words with us
take care
jm

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-07-08 08:16 AM


Maureen....what words I would have had, left me as I skipped down the pages, being treated, two for one...

in absolute amaze at the beauty. We all thank you for this very tender, heartfelt read.

Victoria
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Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-07-08 10:00 AM


lovely maureen..i as you wish he could have met us at longwood..but time was not like you said on our side..thank you for posting his poem..i saved all his poems from the archives..he will missed by all of us HUGSS

               ~Victoria~

Sven
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4 posted 2001-07-08 11:48 AM


wonderful Maureen. . . and now that he is gone. . . we can only wish he and his family godspeed. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-07-08 05:23 PM


These are beautiful words Maureen...James
athena4
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Posts 622

6 posted 2001-07-08 05:43 PM


Maureen,
    A beautiful tribute to a wonderous poet.  I'm sure he will hear your words even now...
      Elise

Krawdad
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7 posted 2001-07-08 05:47 PM


Thank you for sharing this, Maureen.
catalinamoon
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8 posted 2001-07-08 06:11 PM


Multiple sighs..This is beautiful, tender, and so very sad.
Sandra

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