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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This ardient urge, drives my impulses towards you. This longing for you, strips me of all my needs. This hunger to love you, makes me want to love you more. This desire to have you, doesn't let me be. This provocative passion. makes me dream about you. Sketching your body with my lips, while savoring your intimacy. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
WOW....visual to say the best. WOW let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Very amorous. Well done! |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Intresting imagery. lovely none the less. I truly enjoyed this. "What I was living, the same am I now, dead." --Capaneus, THE INFERNO |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
good job |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
you certainly know how to show not tell your poems,i love it  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful, walker. All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is a feeling I know all too well, a desire, a craving in loving someone. Your passion shines brightly in this poem! I sure hope you've found your love, for you deserve the greatest love! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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