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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-07-07 01:24 PM

Summer Morn
Virginia Salter

respite was good
dawn is here
and yawn has left its keeper
the morn is golden
yes, glorified
with the joy of floral creepers

silhouettes design the soil
with lattice lines and cool
peace ensues
in radiant hues
missed only by the fool

and I at rest
in casual dress
do thrive on peaceful strummings
pluck at my soul
with gentle roll
to calm my goings and comings

© July 13,  2000
© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-07-07 02:06 PM

VAS,
Not bad, not bad. It has all the subtle ingredience. Sy
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
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2 posted 2001-07-07 04:00 PM

fools tend to miss a lot don't they, enjoyed this very much.
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2001-07-07 04:16 PM

thank you both, your comments are unique to the other and both enjoyable, glad you liked
Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-07-07 04:33 PM

A good start to a peaceful day.
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