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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2001-07-07 12:30 PM


             


*precious butterfly*

your gentle fingers
lace perfectly through mine
feel the warmth of your smile
wish we could freeze time

precious butterfly
hold you close to me
watch you emerge
the true you i see

soul to soul
heart to heart
we're always together
even when apart

our love will last
come whatever may
just living and loving
day by day

so, spread your wings
it's our time to fly
forever i shall love you
never say goodbye

im alone right now
but i just felt you near
together always
in my heart, always here

AMK
July 7 2001




"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~



[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 07-08-2001).]

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poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2001-07-07 12:35 PM


this is very lovely...i enjoyed this very much.
~dawn

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-07-07 02:37 PM


you know I love this one Amy...
its beauty is in its sincerety and intend.
jm

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
3 posted 2001-07-07 02:45 PM


Darling girl this is so tender so lovely and beautiful.

Soft as a butterfly's step in muy heart this is utterly fabulous.

Take care
love and warm stuff little sis
Mushy
XXX

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2001-07-07 05:25 PM


you know how much I love to fly. . .  

wonderful. . . this has a wonderful loving, warm quality to it. . . the flow is very good. . . and the words are perfect. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
5 posted 2001-07-07 06:31 PM


Amy-girl~

Well now: a poem about butterflies and love, of course I adore it!    
Your writing style keeps getting better and better!

Take care!
Melissa~

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