Open Poetry #14 |
Precious Butterfly |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
*precious butterfly* your gentle fingers lace perfectly through mine feel the warmth of your smile wish we could freeze time precious butterfly hold you close to me watch you emerge the true you i see soul to soul heart to heart we're always together even when apart our love will last come whatever may just living and loving day by day so, spread your wings it's our time to fly forever i shall love you never say goodbye im alone right now but i just felt you near together always in my heart, always here AMK July 7 2001 "but i see your true colors, shining through... i see your true colors and that's why i love you" ~phil collins~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 07-08-2001).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is very lovely...i enjoyed this very much. ~dawn |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you know I love this one Amy... its beauty is in its sincerety and intend. jm Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Darling girl this is so tender so lovely and beautiful. Soft as a butterfly's step in muy heart this is utterly fabulous. love and warm stuff little sis Mushy XXX Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know how much I love to fly. . . wonderful. . . this has a wonderful loving, warm quality to it. . . the flow is very good. . . and the words are perfect. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Amy-girl~ Well now: a poem about butterflies and love, of course I adore it! Your writing style keeps getting better and better! Take care! Melissa~ |
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