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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2001-07-07 03:44 AM




Kat was an ordinary girl,
with a simple, loving heart.
What made her shine,
made her life so fine,
was her love for Tommy Lee.

Tommy was a rich mans son,
destined to follow fathers footsteps.
Who'd planned his life,
even picked a wife,
for his only son, Tommy Lee.

Kat was only a barmaid,
from the lower end of town.
But love is blind,
and can cross all lines,
between her and Tommy Lee.

Tommy courted Kat,
sharing kisses sweet as wine.
With tears in his eyes,
he proposed through her sighs,
I'll marry you, Tommy Lee.

Tommy stood before his father,
listening to his wrath.
I don't care if its rough,
she's not good enough,
you have to leave her, Tommy Lee.

Kat was not expecting
the knock upon her door.
You've had your fun,
now leave my son,
you'll not marry Tommy Lee.

He was a man of power and wealth,
used to getting his way.
Tommy was his son,
his only one,
and Kat wasnt for Tommy Lee.

He set out to destroy her,
to destroy the love they shared.
But to her dying breath
she'd but profess,
her love for Tommy Lee.

Tommy gave up his wealthy family,
and married Kat that same day.
And it wasnt to long,
'til a babe came along,
their baby....Tommy Lee.


[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-07-2001).]

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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
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1 posted 2001-07-07 04:49 AM


A very intersting story ....I enjoyed it. Good Write
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2001-07-07 07:48 AM


Well I guess that's where love crosses all boundaries and lives in the heart!  Nice ending!   Sort of like the movie "Arthur"
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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3 posted 2001-07-07 09:28 AM


Whew...when I saw the title? I thought for a sec there was going to be a video!  

Enjoyed..Miss Paula...sort of like "A Place In The Sun"!  

Sven
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4 posted 2001-07-07 06:33 PM


a story well told. . .

will there be more???  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
5 posted 2001-07-08 01:33 AM


Waseem Cheema...Thank you very much...

ethome...the heart is the only place there is right? When you love...dont you look beyond the wheres and whys?

serenity...OHHHHHHH YOU!!!!!! well keep watching lol there may be a video yet hehehe...dont give ole Tommy Lee ideas, you naughty thing

Sven....more? mayhaps....thank you

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