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LADY LYON
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since 2001-06-22
Posts 12
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-07-06 11:56 PM


I need to go to sleep, but I can't get there...

   ...from here...


                         ...from where?...


A place in which I fret and think too much
    "Water is calm until you touch it"
      "Air is freeing until you fall"


Now that I recognize and understand these fears, I go...


      ...where?...


                         to
                        sleep

"Don't take the blue pill..."

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poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2001-07-07 11:07 AM


oh i know this feeling, not being able to sleep....but somehow finding that calming place where fears dont exist any longer....i liked this.
*dawn*

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
2 posted 2001-07-07 12:09 PM


Real nice, love it.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Jonathon A. Lowry
Junior Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 38

3 posted 2001-07-07 12:20 PM


i really like this  it leaves just enough open so the mind wonders what is sleep why we need it and just how important it is


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