Open Poetry #14 |
By a Lull |
LADY LYON Junior Member
since 2001-06-22
Posts 12CA, USA |
I need to go to sleep, but I can't get there... ...from here... ...from where?... A place in which I fret and think too much "Water is calm until you touch it" "Air is freeing until you fall" Now that I recognize and understand these fears, I go... ...where?... to sleep "Don't take the blue pill..." |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh i know this feeling, not being able to sleep....but somehow finding that calming place where fears dont exist any longer....i liked this. *dawn* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Real nice, love it. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Jonathon A. Lowry Junior Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 38 |
i really like this it leaves just enough open so the mind wonders what is sleep why we need it and just how important it is |
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