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one candle burning |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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The cold came in and touched my soul I feel it always feel its hold and I wander to the glass and breathe the warmth of summer's past... expelling circles of the fog dreaming of a yuletide log and all the hopes of spark within-- the wish, the prayer to live again... Solstice she my dampened friend-- the dark of days shan't do me in... I watch I wait I bow my head knowing loving light instead... one candle burning all I need a flicker's yearning plant of seed--- a solitary whim of need... a spark of life dispelling dread the boast of birth life after death... (repost with a slight revision for Wils...) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity, this is beautiful  the end........soft hugs, SEA |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
One light in the dark of night, to be seen and welcome you home..Even a candle flame can warm the soul...gentle smile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity-- a spark of life dispelling dread the boast of birth life after death... Loved this, especially the above. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
I really love your form here. Very eloquently written. Hugs, ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
God Bless, Bill..... (and Serenity, this was beautiful) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
beautiful indeed my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some leave lights behind that are never fully extinguished....he was always eager to read your work, Serenity.... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A soul touching write my friend~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
one candle burning here, too......... thank you for this, serene-one |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
OH I guess I must have missed this sad news. I feel awful. But thanks for the beautiful poem, Serenity, as always, you speak volumes in exquisite form. Sandra |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
A lovely write, beautiful and compeling. Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Solstice she my dampened friend-- the dark of days shan't do me in... I watch I wait I bow my head knowing loving light instead... Through the cold night a gentle breeze blows to warm your heart. Very beautiful, Seren. "Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
serenity, Beautiful, touching...the light lives on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Serenity This was so very beautiful. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Seems funny to thank anyone, but I did want to acknowledge you all. But truly? This was just for Wils...with my love. Thank you all, for showing your love. |
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