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Toyy
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since 2000-03-02
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0 posted 2001-07-06 08:28 PM


Once in a lifetime

I ask my self
When have I felt
A love like this
I have felt love before
Was it real
Or just a dream
Imaginary
It felt real
Something missing
In the past
I have been deceived
By my fears
And imaginings
But they don’t deter me now
I believe, I know
I have never felt
A love like this
I see your green eyes
Shining their light on me
I am ready
The fear still there
Willing
To take the chance
My failings and weaknesses
Make me human
But deep inside
I have this heart
Won’t you come inside
And be a part of my splendor
Don’t be frightened
My heart is yours
This love is real
I ask my self
When have I felt
A love like this before
Never
True love comes
But once in a lifetime
This is it
I love you
Truly
Deeply
Completely

© Copyright 2001 Gil - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2001-07-06 08:38 PM


Such a wonderful picture of love you weaved with your words, I enjoyed it very much.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
2 posted 2001-07-06 10:27 PM


Nice read with feeling..Welcome to Passions..gentle smile
MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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3 posted 2001-07-06 11:21 PM


Very flowing and sincere.  I hope this love infects all of us and lets us appreciate each other more.  Very nice write here -- feels like music would accompany it very well.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-07-07 02:04 AM


Toyy~

'I have this heart
Won’t you come inside
And be a part of my splendor'


Now that is just a LOVELY thought !
Thanks for sharing it.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven
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5 posted 2001-07-07 08:18 AM


this is just too true. . . great job. . .

you've done well with this. . . welcome to Passions!!!  Hope that you'll be with us for a while. . .  

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