Open Poetry #14 |
Once in a lifetime |
Toyy Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 16Reno Nv. |
Once in a lifetime I ask my self When have I felt A love like this I have felt love before Was it real Or just a dream Imaginary It felt real Something missing In the past I have been deceived By my fears And imaginings But they don’t deter me now I believe, I know I have never felt A love like this I see your green eyes Shining their light on me I am ready The fear still there Willing To take the chance My failings and weaknesses Make me human But deep inside I have this heart Won’t you come inside And be a part of my splendor Don’t be frightened My heart is yours This love is real I ask my self When have I felt A love like this before Never True love comes But once in a lifetime This is it I love you Truly Deeply Completely |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Such a wonderful picture of love you weaved with your words, I enjoyed it very much. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Nice read with feeling..Welcome to Passions..gentle smile |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Very flowing and sincere. I hope this love infects all of us and lets us appreciate each other more. Very nice write here -- feels like music would accompany it very well. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Toyy~ 'I have this heart Won’t you come inside And be a part of my splendor' Now that is just a LOVELY thought ! Thanks for sharing it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is just too true. . . great job. . . you've done well with this. . . welcome to Passions!!! Hope that you'll be with us for a while. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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