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Aqua Allure |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 like oceanic undulation over the coastline of me, you've arranged turquoise layers of flight into these lackluster eyes... like miles of unrestricted vision proceeding toward the opposing shore, you’ve got my thoughts focused on such fascination... like nature’s appeal luring the sun back above the horizon from the underworld, you’ve tempted me with the notion of your assistance with curtailing the advances of uncertainty... the assembling of morning song’s melody keepers introduce the scent of newness in the compact package of serenity... for the trouble I’ve endured to get here, you’ve reimbursed me with stacks of clouds... with untamed reverie growing rampant among the heated minutes, and streams of impatience accepting the invite of the source, you’ve acquired the magenta sunrise of this fervor... mine is fully yours...yours is of the azure essence, not unlike the liberation of floating above clear heaven... distribute to the wind the ashes of manifestation’s silence and bring to me the latitude and longitude at which they were scattered... -kh 07/06/01 it was love that first drew me, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhhhhhhh. . . now this is where I need to be. . . thanks sp, I needed this one!!  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was beautiful. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Wow!!!Great job, SP, very wonderful read...gentle smile |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
How lovely! This was so wonderfully penned  Melissa~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, visions of beauty abound. Thanks. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the assembling of morning song’s melody keepers introduce the scent of newness in the compact package of serenity... for the trouble I’ve endured to get here, you’ve reimbursed me with stacks of clouds... with untamed reverie growing rampant among the heated minutes, and streams of impatience accepting the invite of the source, you’ve acquired the magenta sunrise of this fervor... mine is fully yours...yours is of the azure essence, not unlike the liberation of floating above clear heaven... distribute to the wind the ashes of manifestation’s silence and bring to me the latitude and longitude at which they were scattered... ==================================== whew...talk about waking up on the right side of the bed... the images and emotions in this are so grandly expressed that I hardly know what to say... outstanding level of inspire here SP most impressive write groovy too  We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
K- This is oustanding...I'm highly impressed. Your use of imagery and symbolism in this one was amazing. Combine that with the lovely sentiments from your heart, and I stand in complete awe my friend. Take care hon. I'll be in touch soon. Amy "but i see your true colors, |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Snowpants, you are trully talented, I absolutely love this one. Thanks. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
forgot to put this one in me library silly me  Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Sven: thanks...glad I could give you a nice image...happy you enjoyed! Sue: thanks...glad you could stop by! Logan: thank you so much...happy to know you liked this! Melissa: thanks for your kind words...glad you liked this! Sandra: thanks! your words are very kind...glad you enjoyed! JM: YOU?! Hardly know what to say?? Wow...then I have done my job, haven't I?  Seriously, thanks, m'friend...it means a lot to me! Aims: well, another job complete here, too! thanks, girlie...yer da best! -e ~~~~~~walker: why thank you so much, my friend, for your wonderful reply! glad you liked this! J: silly? nope...just think it's all that smog...hehe sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
What an inspiring write, SP, I've enjoyed reading every poetic line! bravo! *smiles* ~Tier |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
my favorite color in words...loved it all ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful images smiled upon with inspiration. *S* This is lovely. |
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