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Call Girls |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Call Girls We talk about them as they form; Tight, curvaceous, stacked with heat Drawn from warm waters Off the west coast of Africa. We give them names, And watch them move, As if what weathermen have termed The inter-tropical convergence zone Were actually a hall with rooms And numbers, numbers, lots of these. Alone and fumbling with his keys A man of business locks his door While down the narrow way proceeds A set of hips unhinged for more Than motion down a corridor. RMW |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Why do I have this silly grin on my face  As only you can do, Bob. Well done! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Interloper .... Thanks. You know, up until a few moments ago this had the title "Hurricanes". I hope the switch does not offend folks here. Thanks again. Off to enjoy some of yours. Bob |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You do it, time and again....and then, you leave, only to sneak up on us like an unannounced storm in the night.... [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 07-06-2001).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob--This was great!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(grinning) Only you RMW.. only you... I do so enjoy your way with words and image... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I just hope they swagger elsewhere... Allison and her crying jag just didn't know when they'd worn out their welcome! LOL. This is great, RMW... I enjoyed! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I had to read it twice...the second time with my eyes open so I could see past the title...cut the title had me expecting something else and between that and thinking about things right here, I was distracted when I finally say their birthplace, then I understood fascinating, fascinating metaphor, too |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed, only you Bob. . . could make it look this way. . . great job my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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