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Open Poetry #14

Stealing From Sleep

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-07-06 09:09 AM

With silent stealth
The sun creeps over
horizon as it steals
the last vestige of night
from morning sky,
Leaving penniless
Eyes to blink.
No watercolor image
this blood red cut of clouds
that lie waiting for their
turn to pass the day
As I begin mine.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-06 09:25 AM

wow.....my day starts with a screaming alarm clock and two big black labs needing out! LOL

I liked this very much

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-07-06 10:20 AM

Leaving penniless
Eyes to blink.
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I gotta tell ya, this is GR8! Only the dead could not enjoy.
BRAVO!

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-07-06 10:22 AM

How many will appreciate penniless eyes today....

I know I shall....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-07-06 10:22 AM

SEA... mine usually starts with a half breed malamute and a couple of cats..all wanting attention.. glad you enjoyed!

Interloper: Thank you again for the kind words... you are far too kind in you evaluations..but I sure do enjoy it..( grinning)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-07-06 10:23 AM

Lady: Many thanks... I am glad you enjoyed..

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-07-06 11:13 AM

Oh yes, something we can truly understand. Mine starts with 3 rude cats, and usually a phone ringing

Love this.
Sandra

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