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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-07-06 09:09 AM



With silent stealth
The sun creeps over
horizon as it steals
the last vestige of night
from morning sky,
Leaving penniless
Eyes to blink.
No watercolor image
this blood red cut of clouds
that lie waiting for their
turn to pass the day
As I begin mine.

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-07-06 09:25 AM


wow.....my day starts with a screaming alarm clock and two big black labs needing out! LOL   I liked this very much  
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2 posted 2001-07-06 10:20 AM


Leaving penniless
Eyes to blink.
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I gotta tell ya, this is GR8!  Only the dead could not enjoy.
BRAVO!

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3 posted 2001-07-06 10:22 AM


How many will appreciate penniless eyes today....

I know I shall....

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4 posted 2001-07-06 10:22 AM


SEA... mine usually starts with a half breed malamute and a couple of cats..all wanting attention.. glad you enjoyed!

Interloper: Thank you again for the kind words... you are far too kind in you evaluations..but I sure do enjoy it..( grinning)



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5 posted 2001-07-06 10:23 AM


Lady: Many thanks... I am glad you enjoyed..


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6 posted 2001-07-06 11:13 AM


Oh yes, something we can truly understand. Mine starts with 3 rude cats, and usually a phone ringing  
Love this.
Sandra

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