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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Red roses and white lilies Dripping false diamonds As night time’s black shadows Slowly retreat from early pale And threatening sun. Solitude and silence entwined like lovers caught in passions sticky web struggle in quiet desperate agony against the threads of noise now awakening. Beauty and life passing With each tick of time can not Be recovered or held Except in memory. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your imagery, Sir....is well done....thank you.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cpat Hair, as sands through the hourglass...what a great poem! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beauty and life passing With each tick of time can not Be recovered or held Except in memory. ~~~~~~~~ True. Well done! Deb |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Beauty and life passing With each tick of time can not Be recovered or held Except in memory." this is what spoke to me the most....my memories are precious....because they are all I have left of somethings and some people that mean the world to me  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful, now you have inspired me |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
What wonderful imagery! this is fabulous. A sotfly written write....great job.~Krista |
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