Would you give me a chance

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Open Poetry #14

Would you give me a chance

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

0 posted 2001-07-05 08:18 PM

Would you give me a chance
Lancelot © July 2001

Would you give me a chance
To understand your passion
Your love and emotion
Your feelings and devotion

Would you give me a chance
To prepare your life
For it to be less strife
For it be a sharp knife

Would you give me a chance
To be there for you
You being my honey dew
You being my only view

Would you give me a chance
To make you my dear
So all we can share
So all we can bear

Would you give me a chance
To be your symphony
Just to be your harmony
Just to vanish your melancholy

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

1 posted 2001-07-05 08:37 PM

"The answer
is yes
so be my
guest
& let us
the
music
play..."

Loved this!

~Tier

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

2 posted 2001-07-05 08:39 PM

thanks Tiersdin for commenting. I appreciate the response.
Bilal

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-05 09:24 PM

who wouldn't???

wonderful and flowing my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

4 posted 2001-07-06 12:04 PM

(laughing). She is still thinking. I don't know why take so long though.
Thank you kindly for your remarks.
Bilal

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-04 06:07 PM

(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I've missed you sooooooo much, I hope all is well with you and you have found true happiness, this is a beautiful poem I just know will touch her heart forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bilal, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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