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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-07-05 04:19 PM



Waiting For You In Strawberry Fields
~*~
We promised to meet in the lush green fields
where sweet scents of strawberries fill the air  
and summmer heat gives a promise of thrills
penetrating thoughts quake in the warm damp air
as moments pass, with lovers care I smooth my hair
trembling, solitary listening in the summer sun
cooled by stray raindrops
drifting off in my summer dreams
I wait for you in a strawberry field



BloomingRose

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Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2001-07-05 04:28 PM


Simply lovely thoughts.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-07-05 04:31 PM


Strawberry fields forever...James
Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2001-07-06 11:23 PM


Well now....... I can see that some strawberry fields hold something more sweet than strawberries........  I am certain your love will soon arrive for the pickin's.  Sultry romantic.
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4 posted 2001-07-07 02:00 AM


BloomingRose~
This is simply lovely !
I like what you do with a thought.
Beautifully soft~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-07-07 08:00 AM


Strawberry fields, forever....this brings back the smell of the valley in which I was raised....among the strawberrys....such a fragrance....

thank you for this....

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