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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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0 posted 2001-07-05 03:53 PM


Just talk

talking to him
comes easier all the time,
when
not talking
becomes even less complicated.
just listen
he inhales
taking me

in
out
then in,

holds...

feeling me

all is in my
offer

no need to persuade
him to
breathe again
toward
interludes,

as
peaceful times
approach

then,
nestling into
soft corners
of promises
whispering

pieces of calm
surrounds
sounds

quietly,
implode
follows

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with you
1 posted 2001-07-05 03:58 PM


ohhh,   very nice  
JLR
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2 posted 2001-07-05 04:12 PM


Very cool...loved this!
RMW
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3 posted 2001-07-05 04:16 PM


Eloquent.
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-07-05 04:18 PM


Talking can be very sensual at times.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-07-05 07:19 PM


Imploding is good when you share inner thoughts and feelings with that "special" someone.
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6 posted 2001-07-06 08:35 AM


nicely done... sensual and soft... I enjoyed a great deal
jwesley
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7 posted 2001-07-06 08:36 AM


VERY WELL written!

jwesley

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