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Seduced by Your Words
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Seduce me With words which drip wistfully on to the page Making it harder for me To forget Harder for me to Quit Seduce me With a rhythmic sway Of verse, or tone Moving slowly Or quickly To an ending Seduce me With phrases unheard And images sublime That allow me To close my eyes While they are Tickling my mind Seduce me... Oh... Oh... I think you already Have |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
........wow.......  I like this very much and I'd say you just did the seducing  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
SEA.. you are being kind...and I thank you for the kindness... believe me my words lay flat on a page compared to the many I have read here..posted by yourself, and others. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
modest much? you write wonderfully |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, Cpat, this is fantastic! That is exactly what PIP poets do, don't they. And with this one, you have again accomplished same. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Seduce me With words which drip wistfully on to the page Making it harder for me To forget Harder for me to Quit Seduce me With a rhythmic sway Of verse, or tone Moving slowly Or quickly To an ending ==================== very cool poem, ...and isnt amazing how a typed word can have such an effect on us when its written with a pen of longing... and you captured this feeling well here.. did a little seducing of your own Poetry is quite the master and mistress *S* well done poet sir jm We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love it. Beautiful written. PM |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Oh...this.... this.... this is very, very good.... and then a little more.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes some poetry is very seductive...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat--I think we are all a bit seduced by poetry..I know I am. Enjoyed this! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It happens to ME all the time--and I should know better by now. sigh...this is beautiful. (see? there I go again!) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Cpat, your poem just swept me away someplace... The expression is soooooo alluring, sensual, and golly gee just one of those poems that I wanna keep on reading... So I guess this one goes in2my library for late nite peaks and I thank you for a most enjoyed read! *~coco~* |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was wonderful, I loved ever word. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ron, you rascal |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
sometimes, a little nudge in the right direction... *smiles* excellent poem, Captain, as always... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This poet loves this~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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