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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Heart Beat In the utter of impart I hear the flutter of my heart. Beating ire of desire A dragon belching fire Seeking in each draining hour. Essence of its living power Gulping in each breath of air Breathing out the waste of dare. Each beat resounds a tighter skin Desires of the will within Echoing the walled abyss Searching out a tell tale kiss. Like hands that stretch before the blind Seeking out a touch to find. The promise of a gardens lease The harbor of forever’s peace If I could beat a beat with Eve Than I could stop my minds naïve |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enjoyed the word play in this Seymour... nice work |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
In the utter of impart Seeking in each draining hour. Each beat resounds a tighter skin Like hands that stretch before the blind Tell me where it comes from, I need to find this gold's mind... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the utter of impart I hear the flutter of my heart. Beating ire of desire A dragon belching fire (I see Randy wrote this one with ya)  ============================ Like hands that stretch before the blind Seeking out a touch to find. The promise of a gardens lease The harbor of forever’s peace If I could beat a beat with Eve Than I could stop my minds naïve ====================================== Well, ya know what they say ... if ya want Eve to come to Eden ... all ya gotta do is pick a lot of apples *L* *winkiewinkie*   We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
In the utter of impart I hear the flutter of my heart. Beating ire of desire A dragon belching fire ============ Such a poetic description of heartburn  Well done, Sy. Creative use of words woven into an enjoyable fabric. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Thank you much a nice comment. Lady, Gold is where you find it. LOL *L* JM, I would think you would want to hid the apples? LOL Winkiewinkie Stinky PS if you think Randy helped me with this one, watch for tomorrow. Love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, A very nice comment. Thank you. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - Sir Sy, can I borrow your randy dragon to pen beauties like you? Into my library this goes~ Well done!Take care, Melissa~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 HIDE THE APPLES????? now why would I wanna hide them... How can I bake ya an apple of my eye pie if I hide em? LOL *WW*  OK..then till tomorrow..to see what Randy's up to Ill be here ..with Tinkerbells and APPLES on *L*  WE WILL ALL BE HERE !!! *winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mellisa, You are a sweet heart. Thank you and *L* JM, How about cherry pie and raspberry tea? LOL Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Randy's in the garden~ Randy's up the tree Tossing down the fruit of temptation Trying to 'apple' Eve ! Randy gets the apples Eve prepares them for a pie Randy bakes it in just a breath of a 350° sigh ! ! You two are sooooooooo tempting ! !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And you are so cool. I tried the apple I think I'll try cherry this time. LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Did someone say cherries??? Cherries rule..they are like raspberries... nectar of the gods I JUST KNEW Randy liked cherries LOL *winkiewinkie*  i  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful wordplay and images, Sy. You always amaze me with your words. Much enjoyed. All writing comes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Than cherries it is. Love ya Sy Lone Wolf, Excellent comment, thank you. |
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