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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-07-05 08:08 AM


Heart Beat

In the utter of impart
I hear the flutter of my heart.
Beating ire of desire
A dragon belching fire

Seeking in each draining hour.
Essence of its living power
Gulping in each breath of air
Breathing out the waste of dare.

Each beat resounds a tighter skin
Desires of the will within
Echoing the walled abyss
Searching out a tell tale kiss.

Like hands that stretch before the blind
Seeking out a touch to find.
The promise of a gardens lease
The harbor of forever’s peace

If I could beat a beat with Eve
Than I could stop my minds naïve


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1 posted 2001-07-05 08:14 AM


enjoyed the word play in this Seymour...
nice work


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2 posted 2001-07-05 08:57 AM


In the utter of impart

Seeking in each draining hour.

Each beat resounds a tighter skin

Like hands that stretch before the blind

                    Tell me where it comes from, I need to find this gold's mind...

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3 posted 2001-07-05 08:58 AM


In the utter of impart
I hear the flutter of my heart.
Beating ire of desire
A dragon belching fire

(I see Randy wrote this one with ya)  
============================

Like hands that stretch before the blind
Seeking out a touch to find.
The promise of a gardens lease
The harbor of forever’s peace

If I could beat a beat with Eve
Than I could stop my minds naïve
======================================
Well, ya know what they say ...
if ya want Eve to come to Eden ...
all ya gotta do is pick a lot of apples *L*  
*winkiewinkie*





We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide open if we just find the right words to say.
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-07-05 09:03 AM


In the utter of impart
I hear the flutter of my heart.
Beating ire of desire
A dragon belching fire
============
Such a poetic description of heartburn

Well done, Sy.  Creative use of words woven into an enjoyable fabric.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-07-05 09:08 AM


Cpat Hair,
Thank you much a nice comment.

Lady,
Gold is where you find it. LOL *L*

JM,
I would think you would want to hid the apples?
LOL Winkiewinkie Stinky PS if you think Randy helped me with this one, watch for tomorrow. Love

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-07-05 09:10 AM


Interloper,
A very nice comment. Thank you.

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7 posted 2001-07-05 11:06 AM



Wow - Sir Sy, can I borrow your randy dragon to pen beauties like you?    Into my library this goes~ Well done!

Take care,
Melissa~

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8 posted 2001-07-05 11:20 AM




HIDE THE APPLES?????
now why would I wanna hide them...
How can I bake ya an apple of my eye pie if I hide em?
LOL *WW*



OK..then till tomorrow..to see what Randy's up to
Ill be here ..with Tinkerbells and APPLES on *L*



WE  WILL ALL BE HERE !!! *winkiewinkie*

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2001-07-05 11:36 AM


Mellisa,
You are a sweet heart. Thank you and *L*

JM,
How about cherry pie and raspberry tea? LOL
Winkiewinkie Stinky

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10 posted 2001-07-05 11:44 AM


Seymour~

Randy's in the garden~
Randy's up the tree
Tossing down the fruit of temptation
Trying to 'apple' Eve !

Randy gets the apples
Eve prepares them for a pie
Randy bakes it in just a breath
of a 350° sigh ! !

You two are sooooooooo tempting ! !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-07-05 01:57 PM


Marge,
And you are so cool. I tried the apple I think I'll try cherry this time. LOL

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12 posted 2001-07-05 03:11 PM


Did someone say cherries???
Cherries rule..they are like raspberries...
nectar of the gods  
I JUST KNEW Randy liked cherries LOL
*winkiewinkie*





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13 posted 2001-07-05 04:04 PM


Wonderful wordplay and images, Sy.  You always amaze me with your words.  Much enjoyed.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2001-07-05 04:16 PM


JM,
Than cherries it is. Love ya Sy

Lone Wolf,
Excellent comment, thank you.

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