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in the blink of the eyes... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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eyes open slowly to discover the effect of light playing with shadows creating images of smiles in floating clouds and the splashing of green on the land below some bright spots are all a soul needs to turn away the ghosts of the dark and that is precisely what the eyes seek to see it is ironic that in a coloured world we only see colours, sometimes when they are sprinkled on the canvas deep inside our hearts thereafter all we wish is to see the scenes of eternal beauty for as long as the eyes can remain open until that time when eyes close slowly ! "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, A very deep longing. A very nice write. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Hard to put into words how much I enjoyed this.... it speaks to me this morning..and has given me something to think about... good work here! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful my friend. You may have inspired others to pen further on this subject. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
fine writing, my friend!!!!....  |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Very interesting and very deep! I enjoyed reading your perceptions of the world, seen from a different point of view. Good job! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Such lovely imagery greets one in your phrasing. Nicely put. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir: "some bright spots are all a soul needs to turn away the ghosts of the dark and that is precisely what the eyes seek to see" You see true with all that looking. I really enjoyed this! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
True beauty should always been seen and you wrote one here. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You, my friend, are very wise. Enjoyed your write. All writing comes |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Good writing Suddy, good writing...most perceptive..  KI am a refugee of logic...insisting |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Always a treat to read your poems Sudhir,, this one is no exception. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's always good to see you stretching my friend. . . very philosophical here. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely phrasing and sentiments Sudhir ... this flowed so beautifully, very much enjoyed this. Best wishes, /Kit |
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