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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-07-05 05:59 AM

Treasure Keep

I see the light begin it's shine
another day's begun.
I hear the singing of the birds
in tune with rising sun.
I wait where I shall always be
listening for your call.
I still the silence of my heart
and wish no tears to fall.

I hold the power in my own
yet stall to ease my pain.
I sleeplessly enjoy the dreams
that play events again.
I carry you upon each thought
that dresses me in mind.
I feel your presence timelessly
and treasure keep it's find.
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-07-05 07:09 AM

Oh my .... such beautiful phrasing throughout Wynter, just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-05 08:17 AM

very lovely... enjoyed this a great deal!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-07-05 09:12 AM

I still the silence of my heart
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You DO write so very well, Maureen. I think you are at your acme when you are in between sheer joy and your darkest hours

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-07-06 05:23 PM

visited this again..and find I like more on this visit than the first... and enjoyed it a great deal on the first..

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2001-07-07 03:30 PM

Maureen,

this is my favorite of yours.
something about how you wrote this
really touched deep inside of me.
such soft lovely sentiments from
your heart and the title is perfect!!

take care.
amy

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-07-07 03:53 PM

Maureen, this is truly one of your best, the flow is exceptional.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-07-07 05:23 PM

wonderful my friend. . . thank you for sharing the treasures of your heart. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-07-07 05:26 PM

Flows beautifully upon the page...James

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

9 posted 2001-07-08 11:05 PM

You do have such a beautiful flow with your words, and tender thoughts..enjoyed very much..gentle smile

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